(how far would you go to keep the hope of love alive?)________________
Nostalgic Smile
a girl is crying
she screams for a piece of mind
people came then stop
suddenly it rain
they say raining means blessing
now tears are falling
nights are getting cold
frustration and depression
it reaches it's peak
chop her stubborn heart
useless since can’t decide
don't know what to do
she's a doomed princess
if someone ask you just smile
Nostalgic Smile
a girl is crying
she screams for a piece of mind
people came then stop
suddenly it rain
they say raining means blessing
now tears are falling
nights are getting cold
frustration and depression
it reaches it's peak
chop her stubborn heart
useless since can’t decide
don't know what to do
she's a doomed princess
if someone ask you just smile
it’s a perfect answer
______________Sometimes I wish to run out of this insane situation. I can focus on other things. They aren't the one who makes my world revolves. But, yet, until now, it triggers my mind. Sorry, I think I made you confused. Err. Let me just share you the scenario:
I broke-up with my guy then this old suitor of mine got into the picture.
Then, now they craft my mind. The first guy is asking for a new beginning so that he can prove that he'd learned his lessons. The second man was my former suitor. Before, I told him that I not ready (somekinda like that for him to leave me) however as years passed (take note years) I've learned to like him and now we're too close with each other.
I know I can't have then both so I'm trying to balance everything. Damn.
The hardest thing to do.
Hence, whenever someone asked me about my situation with this guy or that. The safest answer is just to SMILE.
^Am I torn between two lovers? Err.
my poem is not that good, IM NOT A WRITER, Just a blogger? =p
Then, now they craft my mind. The first guy is asking for a new beginning so that he can prove that he'd learned his lessons. The second man was my former suitor. Before, I told him that I not ready (somekinda like that for him to leave me) however as years passed (take note years) I've learned to like him and now we're too close with each other.
I know I can't have then both so I'm trying to balance everything. Damn.
The hardest thing to do.
Hence, whenever someone asked me about my situation with this guy or that. The safest answer is just to SMILE.
^Am I torn between two lovers? Err.
my poem is not that good, IM NOT A WRITER, Just a blogger? =p
6 Critiques:
Think about it throughly, give it time. Make sure whatever you decide (who to pick) is what's best for YOU!
good luck hun
Your situation was kinda complicated. You should really think who's more deserving of your love. The one that will not hurt you anymore and will love you the way you want. Just follow your heart but listen to what your mind says too. Good luck sis!
at least, it's a poem.
and yes, you are torn. this is an uver-emo post.
Yay, i found a companion here in the sea of blogging world. LOL. we're really the same. hihi. :)
yah! this post is very emo..
careful, careful.. that's what i always say to myself. :)
I can feel the confusion in the poem.
Anyway, I don't know what to advice to you, so God bless. :)
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